Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Chapter 1 - The Dumbos

Once there was a family that went camping, but instead of making a campfire they brang their new candles. They had never used a candle before but they still knew how to use one! At night time after they told scary stories they tried to blow out the candles. Mum tried to blow out her candle but she could only blow to the left. Next Dad tried to blow out his candle but he could only blow to the right. Ebony tried to blow out her candle but she could only blow upwards. Next Alec tried to blow out his candle but he could only blow downwards. Then they noticed that everyone who came camping tried to blow out their candles but no one knew how to. So they called the police. The police blew out all the candles for them. *whistle* went the policeman as he blew out the candles. "There you go. I better get going" said the policeman. Then everyone went to sleep except the policeman. After they went to sleep Ebony dreamed about animals. Alec dreamed about flying in space. Dad dreamed about the show that he is going to next week and Mum dreamed about shopping day which is on Sunday. Then it was morning (finally!) They woke up. They had an excellent time camping but before they left they had breakfast, then they packed their things up, then they went home.

2 comments:

  1. What a great story Ella. I can't wait for the next chapter. You're a very clever story writer.

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  2. WOW i love reading your stories Ella! you are very clever!!

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